06-05-2014, 06:57 PM
yeah i was leaning towards that too, it shows the figure far more too which I wanted. I may push her further left so shes slightly hidden by the foliage, suggesting a onlooker/its a secretive thing.
hahahaha yes ezio creeped in there! they are more just placeholders if you see what i mean, to show where she'd be, im gonna do much more dynamic poses for the actual shebang. and yet again you are completely right, the top right looks like something kinda lesbian is about to happen, or they gonna have a fight so yeh maybe not.
yeh i know, they arent great at the thumb stages so i actually looked at them this morning and went 'meh not sure how well this would turn out', which really means i need to kick my arse into doing some comps i havent done a thousand times before. you got any ideas for different comps?
i searched that too actually, comes up with some amazing paintings and also some grannies with boobs out, so mixed results. I may see if i can do some studies from how they framed some of them, because you get a real sense of shyness and secretiveness in some, while others they are swimming out to the person at the shore. very good advice, i am kinda looking at this like 'ok so enviro with generic figure to lead the eye in as a foreground element... guy with stick?', im gonna do a whole load of new comps i think, i want to try to mix it up from what this other guy did with a girl with red hair taking a bath at night with some floaty things, hence having more than one or having someone leading into the frame. I want to make it so that you have maybe three of them there, but two of them either background, or leading into the shot, and cinematic was the best i could think of for doing that. Will play with some others though, good idea. Actually getting excited about a piece which is a all too rare thing sometimes!
thanks :D
hahahaha yes ezio creeped in there! they are more just placeholders if you see what i mean, to show where she'd be, im gonna do much more dynamic poses for the actual shebang. and yet again you are completely right, the top right looks like something kinda lesbian is about to happen, or they gonna have a fight so yeh maybe not.
yeh i know, they arent great at the thumb stages so i actually looked at them this morning and went 'meh not sure how well this would turn out', which really means i need to kick my arse into doing some comps i havent done a thousand times before. you got any ideas for different comps?
i searched that too actually, comes up with some amazing paintings and also some grannies with boobs out, so mixed results. I may see if i can do some studies from how they framed some of them, because you get a real sense of shyness and secretiveness in some, while others they are swimming out to the person at the shore. very good advice, i am kinda looking at this like 'ok so enviro with generic figure to lead the eye in as a foreground element... guy with stick?', im gonna do a whole load of new comps i think, i want to try to mix it up from what this other guy did with a girl with red hair taking a bath at night with some floaty things, hence having more than one or having someone leading into the frame. I want to make it so that you have maybe three of them there, but two of them either background, or leading into the shot, and cinematic was the best i could think of for doing that. Will play with some others though, good idea. Actually getting excited about a piece which is a all too rare thing sometimes!
thanks :D