06-07-2014, 10:43 PM
Everybody already said it, but I need to say it again: Your gestures really look good! I can also only agree with Clockodile about the speed thing. I'm also often very disappointed about how slow I work or how slow everything is progressing, but most of the time, when I watch youtube videos, the artists say: "Don't rush it". Important thing is that you are on your way and with those gestures and anatomy studies you sure are! (:
The girl in your personal work is really cute, I like the expression! I also like how you did the hair, the flow really looks good to me. Here are some little points though: I'm not sure if the pose with the legs works out like this. Actually her knees look very close together to me, but the feet are more apart. I just tried standing like this and it was uncomfortable/not possible. I think if you'd like to leave the general pose like this, her left foot would lift a bit from the ground. I'd also try to add a bit more weight to the skirt and draw her hands like she's really grabbing the fabric. Right now it looks a bit like her hands are just lying on the fabric. I'm by no means an expert though, and poses in general are really hard for me as well. I still hope it helps a bit, maybe. I don't know if you know Senshistock over at deviantArt, she has a huge gallery full of helpful stock. I just had a quick look and found those poses here which might help you out with the legs.
I'd really like to see more of your work, so keep it up (:
The girl in your personal work is really cute, I like the expression! I also like how you did the hair, the flow really looks good to me. Here are some little points though: I'm not sure if the pose with the legs works out like this. Actually her knees look very close together to me, but the feet are more apart. I just tried standing like this and it was uncomfortable/not possible. I think if you'd like to leave the general pose like this, her left foot would lift a bit from the ground. I'd also try to add a bit more weight to the skirt and draw her hands like she's really grabbing the fabric. Right now it looks a bit like her hands are just lying on the fabric. I'm by no means an expert though, and poses in general are really hard for me as well. I still hope it helps a bit, maybe. I don't know if you know Senshistock over at deviantArt, she has a huge gallery full of helpful stock. I just had a quick look and found those poses here which might help you out with the legs.
I'd really like to see more of your work, so keep it up (: