06-09-2014, 08:28 AM
Ok so this is what I did:
Boosted the values in the backgrounds so they are lighter and you get more sense of depth, though at the cost of the night time intimacy and mystery i think which is a shame.
Worked at the main girl for a bit. apparently the boobs got bigger. whoops. still not really happy with them honestly, i think they are the main thing that are bugging me at the moment, using ref obviously but not in the exact same pose. anyone got any crit? bewbs.
Detailed and put in some harder edges as suggested, also detailed a little bit more in general, though still need to tighten up a lot.
Fixed the lighting on the main character a bit more, as it was too warm as i was told, so its more moonlight-ish now. still slightly warmer than everything else, but thats nice to pull focus i think and I'm allowing myself a bit of artistic licence.
Also added the effect of the glowing water to the body and surrounding shroom, suggested a bit of translucency too (i may take that further so you can almost see the glowing water in the shroom like a pool). Also noticed the bit just to the right of the main waterfal bit is too dark in value, will tone that down a bit.
please to tell me what you think!
Boosted the values in the backgrounds so they are lighter and you get more sense of depth, though at the cost of the night time intimacy and mystery i think which is a shame.
Worked at the main girl for a bit. apparently the boobs got bigger. whoops. still not really happy with them honestly, i think they are the main thing that are bugging me at the moment, using ref obviously but not in the exact same pose. anyone got any crit? bewbs.
Detailed and put in some harder edges as suggested, also detailed a little bit more in general, though still need to tighten up a lot.
Fixed the lighting on the main character a bit more, as it was too warm as i was told, so its more moonlight-ish now. still slightly warmer than everything else, but thats nice to pull focus i think and I'm allowing myself a bit of artistic licence.
Also added the effect of the glowing water to the body and surrounding shroom, suggested a bit of translucency too (i may take that further so you can almost see the glowing water in the shroom like a pool). Also noticed the bit just to the right of the main waterfal bit is too dark in value, will tone that down a bit.
please to tell me what you think!