07-12-2014, 03:59 PM
Looks like someone already mentioned the face, but I noticed the lighting on too. You've got this orange light coming from canvas right and lighting up that side, but the lighting on the left (which would probably be obscured by the wing anyway) makes her abs look like they're two big tubes running down her midriff. Even crazy abs would be flatter, or she would be fat and not have visible abs. I know this doesn't cover quite as much as the other reply, but hopefully this still helps, even though it's a bit redundant.
