07-14-2014, 05:32 PM
Nice variety and amount of stuff going on man! I like that water wizard dude :) As a crit, one thing I notice is that in terms of lighting, the focal points don't feel like they stand out enough. I think you could push the values and contrast more in some of your images, particularly when it comes to the secondary light sources that are shining on the characters' bodies. Or if you're going for the dark painterly thing, some Jaime Jones studies might be helpful as he's super good at creating strong focal points through his value compositions without having to always rim light or having a super strong spotlight on the character.
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