07-17-2014, 01:13 AM
TUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUXICPUNDA!!
Hey, cool stuff, i think it'd be good for you to work on things that are more... challenging? I don't know face in front view is pretty easy, and you did a fantastic job on those; I just think it would give you more versatility to challenge yourself and do you know, portraits from different angles. I see you're also using some composite work in these paintings, which is fine, just don't let that overtake good draftsmanship.
Like i see these faces you draw in pencil and they have many mistakes which can be fixed with practice and repitition, just try to get it right and don't worry about shading too much/or presentation. Your painting abilities are really coming along, definitely when it comes to making finished things.
And also i recommend working on gestures and stuff, looking at these horseriders, the colors/values are nice but the anatomy and poses need a lot of work. Like the guy on the left his hand isn't great, his legs proportions especially in the thigh are too small, and the guy on the right doesn't seem to have a midsection or legs at all.
I do enjoy the drawing of your room, you seem to grasp perspective okay, just work on really grasping it... Awesomely! like some lifepaintings would be cool, or more of those types of drawings. Yea, definately work on the anatomy and gestures, do hundreds even thousands!!
Hope i don't sound like an asshole and this helps you, you're doing great punda!
Hey, cool stuff, i think it'd be good for you to work on things that are more... challenging? I don't know face in front view is pretty easy, and you did a fantastic job on those; I just think it would give you more versatility to challenge yourself and do you know, portraits from different angles. I see you're also using some composite work in these paintings, which is fine, just don't let that overtake good draftsmanship.
Like i see these faces you draw in pencil and they have many mistakes which can be fixed with practice and repitition, just try to get it right and don't worry about shading too much/or presentation. Your painting abilities are really coming along, definitely when it comes to making finished things.
And also i recommend working on gestures and stuff, looking at these horseriders, the colors/values are nice but the anatomy and poses need a lot of work. Like the guy on the left his hand isn't great, his legs proportions especially in the thigh are too small, and the guy on the right doesn't seem to have a midsection or legs at all.
I do enjoy the drawing of your room, you seem to grasp perspective okay, just work on really grasping it... Awesomely! like some lifepaintings would be cool, or more of those types of drawings. Yea, definately work on the anatomy and gestures, do hundreds even thousands!!
Hope i don't sound like an asshole and this helps you, you're doing great punda!
70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
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Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]