Adzerak's book o' sketches

[Tygerson]

That master of golems painting is cool! I like the hugeness you convey, and the mobility of the rocks powered by a heated core.

I like the green gas blasting off flesh in the death by dungeon trap. For that sort of disaster, rather than having him lean forward holding the lever, I might have him be hunched and twisted so his shoulder is trying to take the brunt of it. Or have an ineffectual arm thrown up to try and block. Or a hand over his face. Whatever you would do if something were suddenly sprayed at you.

It's a one hour sketch, so it's not like you'll be making changes, but maybe next time you do a story scene, maybe walk around the room and try and feel and act out what you'd do.