07-30-2014, 09:54 PM
Looks pretty interesting, reminds me of Wall-E a bit. I would watch the movie if you haven't just to make sure your story will be different.
Another thing I notice, is that almost everything is rendered the same. It's all pretty matte looking to me. I get that its suppose to be all rusty and dusty, but some metal would still have a little shine left to it. And, I think there is water in your images but I can't tell because it is not rendered like water. the mist just kind of makes it look like dirt or mud at the moment.
Keep working it at though, it's always cool to see someone working on their own stuff.
Another thing I notice, is that almost everything is rendered the same. It's all pretty matte looking to me. I get that its suppose to be all rusty and dusty, but some metal would still have a little shine left to it. And, I think there is water in your images but I can't tell because it is not rendered like water. the mist just kind of makes it look like dirt or mud at the moment.
Keep working it at though, it's always cool to see someone working on their own stuff.