07-31-2014, 04:51 AM
Thanks for your thoughts on the piece! I actually worked on it since this post, so this is not taking into account your critique.
I do see what you mean about the face needing to look a bit more down rather than to the side, so I will try to adjust that.
As for removing the guy with the axe, as you can see I actually added even more crap on the side, but they act as compositional elements to point at the main character. Still not sure about them though.
I also changed his shoulder pad thing. This was hard for me because it's less cool, but I feel like the shoulder/arm movement can be read easier with that change.
I do see what you mean about the face needing to look a bit more down rather than to the side, so I will try to adjust that.
As for removing the guy with the axe, as you can see I actually added even more crap on the side, but they act as compositional elements to point at the main character. Still not sure about them though.
I also changed his shoulder pad thing. This was hard for me because it's less cool, but I feel like the shoulder/arm movement can be read easier with that change.
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