08-11-2014, 10:17 PM
Ha well I wouldn't have thought it but she looks almost as uncomfortable as in the drawing so you've done well capturing that. :)
I think the pose is ridiculous but you know at least it's an exercise in awkward anatomy. I think my comments still stand, foreshortening of that lower thigh and leg is off, the higher leg, is also foreshortened, but not as much in your image (look at the foot perspective). The arm still looks really off. It may be quite extreme in the ref, but it looks more extreme in the drawing. Forms of the body aren't quite there and you haven't really captured the twisting of the lower body accurately enough.
You have the ref, so you should be able to compare with what's off by putting them side by side.
I think the pose is ridiculous but you know at least it's an exercise in awkward anatomy. I think my comments still stand, foreshortening of that lower thigh and leg is off, the higher leg, is also foreshortened, but not as much in your image (look at the foot perspective). The arm still looks really off. It may be quite extreme in the ref, but it looks more extreme in the drawing. Forms of the body aren't quite there and you haven't really captured the twisting of the lower body accurately enough.
You have the ref, so you should be able to compare with what's off by putting them side by side.