Which composition is better? Hospital Death Scene
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Hey guys,

I am having a dilemma. A bunch of people liked the one with the small monitor best, but I really want the monitor to be big. These are sketches.

Which one do you think is better in terms of composition?

I want the focus to be on the monitor, because the point of this scene is that, now that the doctor has killed herself, we see the girl on the bed come back to life. (And we can tell by the lines on the monitor, which are no longer flat-lining..)


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Which composition is better? Hospital Death Scene - by Fueras - 08-22-2014, 05:47 PM

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