Which composition is better? Hospital Death Scene

[Fueras]

Aahh, ok. Yeah, the lighting was just that I got a little carried away with the sketch with the little monitor.

Thanks meat!! :D

The reason why small monitor is preferred is probably that it doesn't shove an obvious point in our faces, and sometimes subtle detail is better than shoving things in the audience's face. If you want it big, then make it mostly out of frame, at an extreme angle, and possibly out of focus as well, so only the end bits of the line that "bleep" is visible.

The big monitor one also seem very flat and looks like an avant garde magazine illustration that's flat color and no shadow. The small monitor one has better lighting.