05-09-2012, 06:08 AM
This piece is great. I just need to chime in with my 2 cents, I have to disagree with Myriam, I think the hair reads really well, along with the headlamp, although it's not turned on? But I have to agree with Piotr, compositionally it could be stronger. Where my eye is drawn is basically immediately to the hair, which is located almost exactly in the top left corner of the image... and not so much elsewhere.
Anyway, just my opinion, looking forward to the next one!
Anyway, just my opinion, looking forward to the next one!