08-25-2014, 09:24 PM
Woah man, I feel you sooooo much on the4 chow piece struggle!! SOOOO MUCH! I had a diferent problem but I've been reworking and erasing shit all the time till I hated it xD
This new version is so much better in the structured sense, I also really dig the props, I'm into that myself, adding some spice to the whole thing. Yours really pop it :)
I only have a couple quick things to say about the piece:
- Watch out for those red pins/balls thingies, they're too saturated, and if you add that to the background it starts to hurt the realism of the piece, so one of the two needs to be tonned down a bit so the other pops.
- Try to be less tight on the face, and focus on getting your hood and basic lighting to work with the rest of the body in a cool way, you can even blur some parts of the face , it will also add to the mystery, while saving you the nightmare of working endless hours to make the face super convincing.
Still I dig a lot your piece man, I think it's one of the best so far, so keep up the hard work ;)
This new version is so much better in the structured sense, I also really dig the props, I'm into that myself, adding some spice to the whole thing. Yours really pop it :)
I only have a couple quick things to say about the piece:
- Watch out for those red pins/balls thingies, they're too saturated, and if you add that to the background it starts to hurt the realism of the piece, so one of the two needs to be tonned down a bit so the other pops.
- Try to be less tight on the face, and focus on getting your hood and basic lighting to work with the rest of the body in a cool way, you can even blur some parts of the face , it will also add to the mystery, while saving you the nightmare of working endless hours to make the face super convincing.
Still I dig a lot your piece man, I think it's one of the best so far, so keep up the hard work ;)