Bjork's Journey with her Sketchbook :)

[devin]

looking good bjork! I think you could really push the value structure on that piece, the exposure is looking a bit weird right now. I think if you bring down the pure white vignette it will give you a bit more headroom to work with on the lighting. Looking into such a bright light directly would lose a lot of the detail in the forms and the rest of the image would look darker in comparison. Some play in the edges could help make it more lifelike too.

I did a quick paintover exploring some ideas, hopefully you don't mind:



hope this helps some!