11-04-2014, 03:24 PM
Hey man, whats up?
First i'd say it's a little hard to tell whats going on in the picture, so your char is kind of a scientist?
I think its not clear that he is a sentient being, he looks too much like a monster because the camera is too close to his face, maybe if you give clear hints that he's a thinking being, things that we can relate like armor [i can see just a tidbit over there], hands, items, or else it could be a tribal creature as far as the viewer knows.
About the environment and his chemical weapon, i'd say the same thing, how do i know this is a lab inside a ship? What are you showing the viewer so that he knows its a chemical weapon, or a dangerous environment? Consider placing more lab objects, warning signs etc in your picture!
I hope i helped you out :D
First i'd say it's a little hard to tell whats going on in the picture, so your char is kind of a scientist?
I think its not clear that he is a sentient being, he looks too much like a monster because the camera is too close to his face, maybe if you give clear hints that he's a thinking being, things that we can relate like armor [i can see just a tidbit over there], hands, items, or else it could be a tribal creature as far as the viewer knows.
About the environment and his chemical weapon, i'd say the same thing, how do i know this is a lab inside a ship? What are you showing the viewer so that he knows its a chemical weapon, or a dangerous environment? Consider placing more lab objects, warning signs etc in your picture!
I hope i helped you out :D