11-19-2014, 03:21 PM
Looking through the pages I see a lot of improvement; just keep doing what you're doing and you'll be where you want to be. Main crit from what I see in your imaginative work is don't be afraid to push your values more. You're not going dark enough in the shadow areas in some places, but that darkness (contrast) is what really sells the brightness of the light.
Keep at it!
Keep at it!