12-09-2014, 05:08 PM
Welcome to CD! :)
That seems pretty tall and not that wide for a top of page banner, will it be cropped in some way?
Do you have the site layout or actual site, that you can post as well? It is a bit hard to crit something destined for a web layout without seeing how it sits in relation to other elements?
In general I think the figures are very stiff and have some issues with proportion and quite a bit of work to be done on anatomy. This is more so for the male figures than the female. There are perspective inconsistencies with the big hammer, it looks like it is going into the page, but he is holding it like it should be coming out of the page. Draw hands as accurately as you can, even if it is loose. Hands and faces are the things you need to nail because they can easily bring down your painting if flawed
I won't comment on composition because I'd ideally like to see where this is supposed to fit on a webpage before doing that.
As a design crit on the characters, at the moment it seems like the dude on the left is from a different game completely to the others. Seems more modern? Perhaps this is intended, but I thought I would raise it.
That seems pretty tall and not that wide for a top of page banner, will it be cropped in some way?
Do you have the site layout or actual site, that you can post as well? It is a bit hard to crit something destined for a web layout without seeing how it sits in relation to other elements?
In general I think the figures are very stiff and have some issues with proportion and quite a bit of work to be done on anatomy. This is more so for the male figures than the female. There are perspective inconsistencies with the big hammer, it looks like it is going into the page, but he is holding it like it should be coming out of the page. Draw hands as accurately as you can, even if it is loose. Hands and faces are the things you need to nail because they can easily bring down your painting if flawed
I won't comment on composition because I'd ideally like to see where this is supposed to fit on a webpage before doing that.
As a design crit on the characters, at the moment it seems like the dude on the left is from a different game completely to the others. Seems more modern? Perhaps this is intended, but I thought I would raise it.