03-02-2015, 02:43 AM
DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDE Major amount of progress since the last time I checked!! Them lines are looking a lot sweeter, and the faces too, you clearly have leved up your graps of structure and line quality, also form recognition has improved, so much cool stuff!
Now for the obligatory crit: ( more like advice)
On the painting side of things I like your colours and stuff, but I feel you need to start trying to figure out your edges, by that I mean that the correlation of edges is very stale, it needs more oumpfh! more subtle soft edges, more blending and finding a good balance between that and crisp edges and shit. I mean, if you wanna do only hard edges it's perfectly valid as a style choice or whatever, but I find that understanding soft edges and blending is essential to make cool shit ( I'm actually still finding out how to accomplish this) so maybe try to introduce "fake" soft edges in your still lifes, to see how can you integrate them with what you see.
Overall I think you're showing awesome progress buddy, just keep banging that wall, and keep surprising me with these sweet jumps of quality! :D
Now for the obligatory crit: ( more like advice)
On the painting side of things I like your colours and stuff, but I feel you need to start trying to figure out your edges, by that I mean that the correlation of edges is very stale, it needs more oumpfh! more subtle soft edges, more blending and finding a good balance between that and crisp edges and shit. I mean, if you wanna do only hard edges it's perfectly valid as a style choice or whatever, but I find that understanding soft edges and blending is essential to make cool shit ( I'm actually still finding out how to accomplish this) so maybe try to introduce "fake" soft edges in your still lifes, to see how can you integrate them with what you see.
Overall I think you're showing awesome progress buddy, just keep banging that wall, and keep surprising me with these sweet jumps of quality! :D