04-30-2015, 09:59 PM
Probably not much point saying this since you have a deadline, but the perspective seems off tome. Extreme angle of the ground plane doesn't jibe with the characters or bg. I noticed this with your other pieces too. you tend to eyeball perspective, but it isn't accurate enough yet, so use guides next time maybe. For lighting, the maIn source according to the background is coming from the left behind the characters, but the mainsource on them is from left in front. Their main shadow is from a source mostly above them. Just needs tightening and clarifying. What are your intended focal points? At the moment, the blades take all the glory. Just because they are metal doesn't me a n they have to glow like light sabers :)