05-02-2015, 01:24 PM
I guess you are keeping the background the same as the original, in which case you nearly got the base colours and shapes blocked in, then its just a case of refining and refining as much as you can, with each new pass you can add more and more detail - you'll learn a lot by doing that, it's well worth it. With the character in front, I would move him back a bit because he looks too close to the fire. Also that circle on the ground, in the original painting it's the lady tracing it with her stick, so you'd have to think about what else it could be; a circle of stones, flowers, the ravens from the painting following that shape etc. For his arms, they look too short as they are, either bring them out further to the sides or get some deeper foreshortening going on. Good luck ^^