seeking critique
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Wolk, I think I found your reference image, lol! The thing is, in that reference, there isn't a mountain peak behind the girl _also_ leaning towards the same direction. In your painting the leaning peak accentuated the girl's leaning motion, and it's multiplying the Tower of Pisa feel. If you have the bg mountains in the background, flip it horizontally, or just repaint it so that it's not reinforcing her leaning pose, but pushing against it like a support beam. Flo has a point too about the eagle looking out. If you can flip the ref photo eagle's head, or get a different ref photo, having the eagle look towards the girl would create more of a bond between them.

If you didn't see this one, it has more varied rock formation with the same light direction (and same girl), could be useful: http://www.svidensky.com/UploadedFiles/E...G_2437.jpg

https://wallwidehd.com/mt-everest-peak-a...wallpaper/


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seeking critique - by Wolkenfels - 03-31-2015, 02:56 AM
RE: seeking critique - by darktiste - 04-01-2015, 02:28 AM
RE: seeking critique - by Wolkenfels - 04-05-2015, 02:16 AM
RE: seeking critique - by Wolkenfels - 04-10-2015, 06:13 AM
RE: seeking critique - by Flo - 04-27-2015, 06:50 PM
RE: seeking critique - by meat - 05-06-2015, 01:10 PM
RE: seeking critique - by Wolkenfels - 05-15-2015, 10:04 PM
RE: seeking critique - by Wolkenfels - 05-17-2015, 03:05 AM

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