05-14-2015, 03:23 AM
Good start at your sketchbook, keep drawing! it's the only way to get better :) it's good that you see the figures are stiff, not all of them though... some look ok even though they are a bit stiff. For example you could have pushed the dancing figure more by making the center line ( if you apply it ) more fluid and dynamic, but you are making good progress overall. Keep on pushing :)