05-21-2015, 03:50 PM
Paint over for Jeso. Amit and others gave a lot of good advice, Heres what i think.
1 the frame is too tight for subject matter feels uncofortable
2 the sword is almost tangible to a frame - not good
3 CHaracter (head is alittle too big btw) looks out of the frame. leads the eye out of frame as well
4 cloth behavior is weird
5 chick is stepping out of the frame.
Other major thing about this is they're striking a pose for a fight or a defense. But we cant see what the threat is, which makes the story telling aspect of a picture uncomfortable for the viewer.
Hope itll help man,
1 the frame is too tight for subject matter feels uncofortable
2 the sword is almost tangible to a frame - not good
3 CHaracter (head is alittle too big btw) looks out of the frame. leads the eye out of frame as well
4 cloth behavior is weird
5 chick is stepping out of the frame.
Other major thing about this is they're striking a pose for a fight or a defense. But we cant see what the threat is, which makes the story telling aspect of a picture uncomfortable for the viewer.
Hope itll help man,