07-07-2015, 09:13 AM
This is a bit late, and I'm new, so please take this with a grain of salt:
Overall, this looks really neat! He definitely looks lordly, and it carries that same "c'mon, man, I got things to do" feeling that old portraits tend to have.
From the line drawing, it looks like he has no hair, but the ink wash shows what could either be hair or just a really shiny spot on his scalp. I suggest revisiting that in order to make clear what all is there (or not there). The eyes could also use some work since they are just black dots right now. The greave on our right has a blue/white line that seems very out of place, too. And I wish you had developed the sword a bit more (and the background, but I get that the focus is on the guy).
Overall, the lighting seems fantastic and the character is believable. Keep up the awesomeness! :D
Overall, this looks really neat! He definitely looks lordly, and it carries that same "c'mon, man, I got things to do" feeling that old portraits tend to have.
From the line drawing, it looks like he has no hair, but the ink wash shows what could either be hair or just a really shiny spot on his scalp. I suggest revisiting that in order to make clear what all is there (or not there). The eyes could also use some work since they are just black dots right now. The greave on our right has a blue/white line that seems very out of place, too. And I wish you had developed the sword a bit more (and the background, but I get that the focus is on the guy).
Overall, the lighting seems fantastic and the character is believable. Keep up the awesomeness! :D