07-26-2015, 03:28 AM
Wow, there's a ton of improvement here! Honestly, the only thing I can say here is just what others have said: keep on studying from life and working on construction. I am noticing huge differences between those you do from memory (like your characters), and those you do from books/life/websites. Try to keep what you've worked so hard to learn, and transfer it over to what you're drawing from imagination. You got this! :D