07-26-2015, 10:23 PM
Piece A:
the character stance is strange and uncomfortable.
The lighting is incorrect: direction, intensity, reflections,
There are some tangents chopping off the characters head.
The sword leads out of the picture as do the branches.
i would probably place the char and the bridge on the left side leading in to the picture.
a gentler transition into the background would be nice.
Greater color variety and more contrast for the main char would help.
piece B:
man i love your style! it is extremely reminiscent of baldurs gate illustrations by manley. love the skin tones.
The cloth is also cool, the patterns etc.
Greater material indication would help this piece (metal etc)
The anatomy is a little strange...(shoulder, chest, legs) which is odd considering your anatomy skills
The design seems a little unrefined (The head area...)
Also if this is an illustration you need more detail if it is concept art you need more variations.
Piece C:
Again awesome work classic style :D
needs more detail and movement in the piece.
material indication can really help this piece
also maybe a sword at the lower area of the screen.
Piece D:
Gesture and pose are problematic.
anatomy issues: wing connection & the feet.
again the composition, its very static and fixed. considering this is a piece in water....
The color pallete is interesting but imho too monochromatic dont be afraid of colors
The trees are oddly shaped. maybe a different shape language is necessary.
Pieces E & F:
Love the silhouttes great job.
The weapon on the right in the second piece in particular is awesome.
Characters are great nothing to add
Piece G:
This guy is awesome. that is all
really hyped to see more of this :D
the character stance is strange and uncomfortable.
The lighting is incorrect: direction, intensity, reflections,
There are some tangents chopping off the characters head.
The sword leads out of the picture as do the branches.
i would probably place the char and the bridge on the left side leading in to the picture.
a gentler transition into the background would be nice.
Greater color variety and more contrast for the main char would help.
piece B:
man i love your style! it is extremely reminiscent of baldurs gate illustrations by manley. love the skin tones.
The cloth is also cool, the patterns etc.
Greater material indication would help this piece (metal etc)
The anatomy is a little strange...(shoulder, chest, legs) which is odd considering your anatomy skills
The design seems a little unrefined (The head area...)
Also if this is an illustration you need more detail if it is concept art you need more variations.
Piece C:
Again awesome work classic style :D
needs more detail and movement in the piece.
material indication can really help this piece
also maybe a sword at the lower area of the screen.
Piece D:
Gesture and pose are problematic.
anatomy issues: wing connection & the feet.
again the composition, its very static and fixed. considering this is a piece in water....
The color pallete is interesting but imho too monochromatic dont be afraid of colors
The trees are oddly shaped. maybe a different shape language is necessary.
Pieces E & F:
Love the silhouttes great job.
The weapon on the right in the second piece in particular is awesome.
Characters are great nothing to add
Piece G:
This guy is awesome. that is all
really hyped to see more of this :D