07-31-2015, 07:12 AM
Quote:@Olooriel. I think that is fantastic. Taking feedback like a boss!
@Amit Dutta
Hehe, thanks a lot! :D
Quote:Olooriel - I really didn't expect that... Damn, you tackled that critique head on! That's really a lot better relative to your last post. Some further minor critiques is that the femurs are a little wide and bulky at the knees. The iliac (hip bones) is somewhat crunched. It's one of the harder areas of the figure and fairly difficult to get right. If you look at some reference and try to do a few more, just focusing on that area I think you'll get it right! You might also like to draw the hipbones separately a few times to get familiar with their complicated shape.@Tristan Berndt
That's what I'm here for, isn't it? ;)
Yes, that drawing made me realise that I really didn't understand the hips... will pay closer attention to those on the next ones. Thanks for the critique!
@Adam Lina
Thanks a lot for the feedback, I'll have a closer look at the knees...
For now I've done a more detailed study of the hips, trying to understand the 3d shapes:
And some skulls, hoping to improve my faces:
EDIT
I also tried to fix the mistakes you pointed out before moving on to another one, and I think the knees and elbows are better now? I still have trouble understanding the shape of the hips though :/