Taylor's Sketchbook of Patterns and Progress.
Whoa, awesome stuff! Really dig the last update.

Since you asked for C&C:

Some of the foreshortening/perspective on the giant robot seems a bit off; for instance, his right (viewer's left) index finger looks a little too skinny, the center line of his chest doesn't seem to match the angle of his torso (you can see too much of the left side (viewer's right) of his chest), and his right (viewer's left) shoulder plate seems like its bottom opening should be aimed more at the camera, rather than towards the floor. Overall awesome painting though!

For the city, the buildings don't look like they're vanishing to the same horizon line (right building seems to have a significantly higher horizon line). And the figure looks like he is in the process of falling off of his perch to the left; maybe try rotating the canvas to remove the skew in order to check his pose (and rotating it back again of course because the skew is cool looking). Again though, really sweet painting!

I'm no expert so take my feedback with a grain of salt :). Keep on rockin dude!

Come tell me how to fix stuff in my sketchbook: Broadway's Sketchbook
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