Demon painting (please help!)

[lzybonez]

Hello everyone, I'm having a hard time with the creature in the foreground. I wanted the anatomy to be kind of pushed to the extreme, but i'm not sure how successful i've been. Also the lighting feels really weird, along with the foreshortening. I would love some help and feel free to be as harsh as you want. Also i've been having some trouble with this file uploading and looking different than it does on my screen, anyone know why that happens?