08-16-2015, 10:46 PM
(08-16-2015, 05:15 PM)malia Wrote:(08-15-2015, 08:52 AM)Bookend Wrote: Looks great, but I'd suggest sticking with gray scale values for awhile. Push those value studies.
You'll figure your way to a style, no rush.
Thanks for the feedback! :D What do you feel is wrong about my colors? Do you feel the value relations are wrong? Does the color feel too dull/ too saturated?
Not necessarily 'wrong', because you're going in the right direction! I just think that there isn't a lot of differentiation/variation in your values. Allow yourself to go darker in the darkest places, and bring out those medium tones. From what I can see, there isn't enough contrast here. That's why I think you should work in gray scale a bit, so you can see it better.