Amalias Sketchbook

[Amalia]

Looks great, but I'd suggest sticking with gray scale values for awhile.  Push those value studies.

You'll figure your way to a style, no rush.

Thanks for the feedback! :D What do you feel is wrong about my colors? Do you feel the value relations are wrong? Does the color feel too dull/ too saturated?

Not necessarily 'wrong', because you're going in the right direction!  I just think that there isn't a lot of differentiation/variation in your values.  Allow yourself to go darker in the darkest places, and bring out those medium tones.  From what I can see, there isn't enough contrast here.  That's why I think you should work in gray scale a bit, so you can see it better.
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That's a great explanation, I absolutely see your point there, I will pay attention to those things and will do more value studies! Thank you for taking your time for the explanation, I am very greatful for your comments!