unfinished composition
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The figure is pressed too close to the left edge, so I moved it a bit towards the center. I also darkened the figure as a whole because when back lit like that, you basically see a silhouette. I added more rim light to the hair, painted over the background with a light purple blue. Added some more shapes to the factory, and gave them light side and dark side. Then I gave it a cheesy lens flare :D

You can use some middle ground objects between the person and the factory.  Even some shrubs or collection of boulders would do.




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unfinished composition - by 5e8i - 08-18-2015, 10:12 PM
RE: unfinished composition - by meat - 08-19-2015, 11:32 AM
RE: unfinished composition - by Amit Dutta - 08-19-2015, 04:16 PM
RE: unfinished composition - by 5e8i - 08-19-2015, 05:19 PM

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