08-22-2015, 06:48 PM
Heya,
Great image!
I prefer the first image also. I think you can try,
a. move the tree from the spine to the left end of the composition and use it to frame the piece
b. vary sizes of tombstones and grave markers (receeding into distant marks) to stretch the depth
I just thought of something else,
you can also move the tree off centre slightly,
then move the moon into the top left corner, try making it high up and large maybe?
something like this:
https://d3b4yo2b5lbfy.cloudfront.net/wp-...0x1200.jpg
this would match the lighting on the character better, but it would also mean adjusting the shading on the environment.
Hope it gives you some food for thought!
Great image!
I prefer the first image also. I think you can try,
a. move the tree from the spine to the left end of the composition and use it to frame the piece
b. vary sizes of tombstones and grave markers (receeding into distant marks) to stretch the depth
I just thought of something else,
you can also move the tree off centre slightly,
then move the moon into the top left corner, try making it high up and large maybe?
something like this:
https://d3b4yo2b5lbfy.cloudfront.net/wp-...0x1200.jpg
this would match the lighting on the character better, but it would also mean adjusting the shading on the environment.
Hope it gives you some food for thought!