Requiring help on a composition

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Having other smaller ships would help populate the image, just be careful of their sizes and distance. That is obviously a planet, and planets are huge, so if a ship can be seen, they're not that far away from your Main Ship, and thus really far away from the planet. If you want to show a range of different ships at different distance from the planet, you might use only a string of light to indicate flight path of distant ships too distant (and thus closer to the planet) to be seen.

I tried a quick paint over, see if it's anywhere closer to where you want your piece to be at.