Critique please !!
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@meat 

1. Lack of depth + lack of definition.( i got this critique (image added) from fb group LEVEL UP. i guess that is what i feel like missing from this piece.)

I was able to find out these mistakes by my own.(god knows what else i am missing) >>

2.being a perfectionist (that's why takes a lot of time)
3.detailing not just focal point and foreground , but everything, no area of rest 
4.not figuring out the whole picture before rendering (again , took way too much time for a piece like this)
5.lack of ref gathering and research
6.Lack of targeted study before rendering this piece, like little study of rock , mountain 
it should be like >> study something, then apply with my own piece


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Critique please !! - by tmldraws - 08-28-2015, 03:50 AM
RE: Critique please !! - by meat - 09-02-2015, 12:54 PM
RE: Critique please !! - by tmldraws - 09-03-2015, 11:29 PM
RE: Critique please !! - by Bookend - 09-04-2015, 12:20 AM
RE: Critique please !! - by meat - 09-05-2015, 12:03 AM
RE: Critique please !! - by Jeremy Ray - 09-07-2015, 01:29 PM
RE: Critique please !! - by tmldraws - 09-08-2015, 08:11 AM
RE: Critique please !! - by DavidSzilagyi - 09-10-2015, 06:24 AM

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