Sketchbook

[Jan Kloidt]

thanks for the crit! I really thought I nailed the story in my first image but i guess it still doesnt come across perfectly :D telling a story in a single image is the hardest thing I've tried so far with art. So many possibilities and 90% of them only work in your head.. I noticed that the head looked too large, too, but since the design is all about a lot of hair, I kept it as a kind of hair storage, like one of these huge aristocratic hairstyles. It feels so stupid that the image that I worked on for almost a week is worse than the one I slapped together in a couple hours xD but maybe it just got better from the mistakes I made and learned from in the first try. Keep pushing Rhasdra! Btw that girl on a bike you drew is super cute! So much energy, I love it! :D