10-06-2015, 06:03 AM
Welcome!
First thing I would suggest is to loosen up the lines.
Even though cartoon styles use line, it's not just an outline. You need to consider how people use line to represent a 3-Dimensional form as a 2D image. i.e. a Line represents an Edge in 3-Dimensional space. The more prominent the line, the harder the edge. Maybe take in some still life studies to explore this.
First thing I would suggest is to loosen up the lines.
Even though cartoon styles use line, it's not just an outline. You need to consider how people use line to represent a 3-Dimensional form as a 2D image. i.e. a Line represents an Edge in 3-Dimensional space. The more prominent the line, the harder the edge. Maybe take in some still life studies to explore this.