Sketchbook Drabbles

[Azuli]

Welcome!

First thing I would suggest is to loosen up the lines.

Even though cartoon styles use line, it's not just an outline. You need to consider how people use line to represent a 3-Dimensional form as a 2D image. i.e. a Line represents an Edge in 3-Dimensional space.  The more prominent the line, the harder the edge. Maybe take in some still life studies to explore this.

Thank you!

I admit, I felt a bit confused at first when you said about loosening up my lines. But then upon reading further, now it makes some sense.