New illo, what's it lacking?

[Admbrns]

Thanks! You were absolutely right. I'm a little gun-shy when it comes to making things dark, because of working with print a lot. I've worked toward your advice and gave a quick curves adjustment and some darker values in places.

I did kind of fudge that hand to the right. An actual hand in that kind of position didn't look too aesthetic to me, I'll have to find a compromise. Here's an update, values could still use pushing in some other areas