10-30-2015, 12:52 AM
It also seems to lack a level of narrative. There's a little there that the viewer can assume or create, but maybe add an extra piece to the story? I'm not entirely sure what story you're telling, or why that story would be compelling to the viewer.
**edit** However, maybe you're just drawing an environment, in which case you don't have to rely on narrative as much
**edit** However, maybe you're just drawing an environment, in which case you don't have to rely on narrative as much