I'm not sure what I can improve on here, but I'm not satisfied

[Amit Dutta]

It's definitely better. I think the comp is still framed in a pretty static way; it is basically a circle that touches the canvas bottom. In my paintover I tried to create a more dynamic sweep and diagonal push overall. i also tried to add more depth with that left tree and plug up the circular tangent to the canvas edge. The overlap of your foreground elements don't really go far enough so they don't really effect the sense of depth much.