I'm not sure what I can improve on here, but I'm not satisfied

[mcclaingreene]

thanks for that explanation, it really helped. I guess I'm just worried about going too far with the grass framing in the foreground because it's something I always do and I guess I'm scared of being repetitive. It works here though, so I really shouldn't have any problems with it. I also added some more narrative elements, so hopefully those are helpful.