Grinding

[Kayo Kid]

hey man! good to see you carrying on with the comics. I like the one in post #65, the pacing is nice. Be careful about 'crossing the line' and breaking the 180 degree rule. I'm not sure if you did... I started to do a paintover with some notes but think you got away with it since your shots from in front / behind shoot right down the line. I'll post what I did anyway, in case the notes at the start are useful. Here: http://i.imgur.com/A2gC9pF.jpg (I'm trying to get my head around this stuff too, so apologies if it's confusing).

Your inktober comic is cool too, except after day 24 I kind of lost the story and couldn't follow it. Maybe needed some speech bubbles to let readers know what is happening. I like the oppressive feel, like something from 1984.

Heads are looking good, but you seem to end up with a really huge cranial mass, makes the head look really too wide. Try stretching out your thirds a bit, the chin should really extend a good way below the bottom of the circle. Keep going man!

Wow! Thanks for the critiques! Yeah, the inktober comic stopped making any sense after a while. I plan on making a series of short comics next year and I would like to revamp it, or maybe use elements of it in something new?

Anyway, I wished I had read this post before I went M.I.A. Because I went and did some head studies and well...