JonHop's Sketchbook

[JonHop]

Hey good to see you still working hard. I'm gonna make a few suggestions. I'm seeing a few things you seem to do in your digital paintings, some seem to look a bit unfinished and unstructured or lose-ish if that makes any sense. First I'd maybe suggest taking a bit more time on your line work perhaps, so you have a strong structure to build upon with your painting.

For the painting part, perhaps just working at a higher opacity, The painting portions seem a bit lose, and the edges of things have low opacity strokes coming off, alot of edges look soft due to the opacity, using a hard small round eraser you can erase those parts out, try to use long strokes or it might make the edges rigidy.

Take my advice with a grain of salt though, maybe just try it out. I'm not highly experienced or anything, just basing from what I'm seeing and my own experience. :)

Thanks for the advice :), I will work on what you have suggested, I think you really hit the nail on the head with the eraser also.

** I will update thi post tomorrow with yesterdays work cause it's quite late now, I'm tired and I dont feel like scanning in numerous pages and then resizing them and uploading them lol