Critique Please
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(12-02-2015, 02:24 PM)meat Wrote: The bright background is taking attention away from the woman, who's stuck between seemingly back-lit, but front-lit at the same time, so things feel flat. I'm not sure what the blurry artifacts are in some random places, so maybe you can clarify that. I like the way you render her face and hands, and using a darker brown for both shape of shade as well as outline for her arm.

thanks for the critique, the white things are supposed to be snow flying in the air, overall this piece is a warm up for an illustration I want to do with a wizard of the coast feel and quality.
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Critique Please - by imPhelikz - 11-30-2015, 05:25 PM
RE: Critique Please - by meat - 12-02-2015, 02:24 PM
RE: Critique Please - by imPhelikz - 12-02-2015, 02:34 PM
RE: Critique Please - by Admbrns - 12-03-2015, 08:10 AM
RE: Critique Please - by imPhelikz - 12-03-2015, 08:19 AM
RE: Critique Please - by Bookend - 12-03-2015, 10:35 PM
RE: Critique Please - by imPhelikz - 12-04-2015, 04:51 AM
RE: Critique Please - by Alberto - 12-04-2015, 05:28 AM
RE: Critique Please - by imPhelikz - 12-04-2015, 07:09 AM

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