(12-04-2015, 05:28 AM)Alberto Wrote: Hey dude:
1. the hair has 3 types of brown color I think you should simplify it.
2. Also if you are going to outline the whole illustration should be outlined or otherwise don't use outline for the final render.
3. the crown lack core shadow.
4. to much negative space in the bottom part. maybe you should crop the image or resize the girl and the circle to occupy more space.
Hi Alberto! thanks for the critique, now that you mentioned I did left to much space at the bottom D:, the crown could look way better as well, I was shooting for a hybrid thing with the visible outline in certain parts but now I see that looks off and makes it look lazy also the hair is always one of my weakest points (too much work) gotta work on that.
thanks for the critique again!