Levelscreen for a children's computer game

[Admbrns]

There are a lot of elements of this that I think are very very nice. If I were doing this, for me to consider it a finished product, I would refine until none of my brushstrokes showed. Smooth all gradients and refine until you can see no brushstrokes. Other than that, the flowers seems a bit heavy handed. I like the idea of them, and I'm not sure you need less of them, I just don't know if how you laid them out is the best answer.

In the top center, the way that cloud is interacting with that pillar is a little awkward, I would just have the pillar in front.

All around, great job, good use of color!