07-05-2012, 06:08 AM
Hey there Nestoronfire.
I tried doing a little paintover. But first I tried figuring out the problemareas:
First of all - right now, they almost have equal weight in the picture. The creature and the guy, which is further away have equal balance - making the monster not seem very intimidating. So:
![[Image: 4gkr2b.jpg]](http://i46.tinypic.com/4gkr2b.jpg)
And my paintover:
![[Image: 2e68o0k.jpg]](http://i50.tinypic.com/2e68o0k.jpg)
So, I did several small touches. I added some impact when the creatures hand is, as if it has just landed there - composition is changes and other small stuff is done. Hope it all makes sense and was helpful.
/Benjamin Bach
I tried doing a little paintover. But first I tried figuring out the problemareas:
First of all - right now, they almost have equal weight in the picture. The creature and the guy, which is further away have equal balance - making the monster not seem very intimidating. So:
And my paintover:
So, I did several small touches. I added some impact when the creatures hand is, as if it has just landed there - composition is changes and other small stuff is done. Hope it all makes sense and was helpful.
/Benjamin Bach