07-05-2012, 06:26 AM
Hi there Flo.
You say this is a "shroom dude" - I think you could emphasize this even more. To me, the things in his head/hair is not telling me enough that this is a shroom guy enough, so maybe you could find a way to show it more clearly?
Anyway, I did a little paintover - there were some tangents, especially the one with the crotch and the axe. So on left, some tangents marked with red - and on right my paintover. I also thought his pose was a bit out of balance so I changed that a little:
![[Image: 263u328.jpg]](http://i46.tinypic.com/263u328.jpg)
Hope it helped:)
/Benjamin
You say this is a "shroom dude" - I think you could emphasize this even more. To me, the things in his head/hair is not telling me enough that this is a shroom guy enough, so maybe you could find a way to show it more clearly?
Anyway, I did a little paintover - there were some tangents, especially the one with the crotch and the axe. So on left, some tangents marked with red - and on right my paintover. I also thought his pose was a bit out of balance so I changed that a little:
Hope it helped:)
/Benjamin